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The Mysteries of You (Short Scene)Who want's to know what happened next?"Take me home now." I ordered. I clenched my jaw and ground my teeth, hoping to hold back the tears in my eyes. I looked over at him, while fastening my seatbelt. The windows of the truck were rolled down, so the crisp fall breeze grazed my face. There was nothing romantic about tonight. He looked up at me and answered, "I can't take you anywhere then where we are right now." A bitter town came out of him. My sympathy drained as the color in my face must have. "Then I don't have time for this, I'll just walk home." I reached for the truck door, but he leaned towards me and grabbed my arm. "Rel, please don't." He pleaded. I yanked my arm away in disgust, "THEN WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!" I exclaimed.I could almost feel the heavy energy he carried. "You don't have to yell at me." Vince said, moving his body away from mine. He rested his hands on the steering wheel, tapping his fingers to a silent song. The sun was setting, and ordinarily we'd be wr